[♥] 'I listen to your heart' signature

Discussion in 'Graphics & Art Showcase' started by Jenny, Dec 29, 2007.

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  1. Jenny

    Jenny Level II

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    I did a lot of colour editing as you can tell and then brush work + text. Damn, the gradient turned out blocky.. I should have saved it under a better quality.
     
  2. micorazonesazul

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    I dunno, it's not my favorite of yours- no offense of course.
    The 'JENNY' at the top left corner kinda just blends in to the scene, and it's hard to distinguish.
    I also think you overdid it with the splatter brushes...I think it's too busy.
    Of course those might have been things that you wanted but my major problem with it is the same font on both lines...I think they clash ..

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  3. Jenny

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    Oh the JENNY is meant to blend in xD I wanted my name somewhere on there but not too noticeable.

    Hmmm.. I should do different fonts for the two text lines?
     
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    I think a better way of making your name kind of blend in or not stand out so much is to do a clipping mask with the font or making the font a dark color and lowering the opacity. The way it is right now looks like a mistake, or something you didn't mean to do.

    I like the colors, though. And I agree that the two lines should've been different fonts. Maybe the first line could be in a sans serif font and the second line in a script? I think that'd look a bit nicer.
     
  5. Jenny

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    Is this any better?

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    kk ang, I'll try that later :)
     
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    The two fonts def. look better as far as clashing..but I think it would look even better if you did the script on the second line and the other font on top..and maybe use 'Scriptina' as the script font?
     
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    i like it, but dont make the name so noticable
     
  8. gmugaman1990

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    i think it looks cool, maybe a bit of vector art feel but i thought your name could have been in a better position to read
     
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