"A NEOFRIENDS GREETING" (An Excellent Poem Ever M

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  1. pandahorde

    pandahorde Level IV

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    A NEOFRIENDS GREETING

    I'd like to be the sort of neofriend that
    you have been to me;
    I'd like to be the help that
    you've been always glad to be;

    I'd like to mean as much to you
    each minute of the day
    As you have meant, old neofriend of mine,
    to me along the way.

    I'd like to do the big things and
    the splendid things for you,
    To brush the gray from out your skies
    and leave them only blue;

    I'd like to say the kindly things that
    I so oft have heard,
    And feel that I could rouse your soul
    the way that mine you've stirred.

    I'd like to give you back the joy
    that you have given me,
    Yet that were wishing you a need
    I hope will never be;

    I'd like to make you feel as rich as I,
    who travel on
    Undaunted in the darkest hours with you to
    lean upon.

    I'm wishing at this time that I
    could but repay
    A portion of the gladness that
    you've strewn along my way;

    And could I have one wish this year,
    this only would it be:
    I'd like to be the sort of neofriend
    that you have been to me.


    Do Anything what you want..LOL
     
    #1 pandahorde, Apr 9, 2007
  2. goncalo

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    Awwww so cute :p
    You've got talent to make poems, matey =)

    +rep too
     
    #2 goncalo, Apr 9, 2007
  3. pandahorde

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    thx but i did not make it look "i just shared it". now im gonna make mine. :D
     
    #3 pandahorde, Apr 9, 2007
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    Wow, I've absolutely zero talent in writing poems like this one. Wonderful job, keep it up!
     
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    Very good, how long it take you to compose that one?
     
    #5 bigjohn, Apr 10, 2007
  6. fightthepower

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    Very creative! 'Course, my teacher would condone it because, apparently, "modern poems do NOT rhyme!"
     
    #6 fightthepower, Apr 10, 2007
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    Wow, the poetic talent in pandahorde. There should be an award for pandahorde. :p
     
    #7 btboy5, Apr 10, 2007
  8. pandahorde

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    . i knew you like the poem i shared.

    i hope theres an award of writing poems / competitions. lol
    becuz i make my original right now.
     
    #8 pandahorde, Apr 10, 2007
  9. marlene

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    Panda... there is NOT an award for copying someone else's writing:

    http://www.sandysknitting.com/archives/001237.html
     
    #9 marlene, Apr 10, 2007
  10. pandahorde

    pandahorde Level IV

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    i did not say i make it.
    Like in the title says "
    "A NEOFRIENDS GREETING" (An Excellent Poem Ever Made)"
    i did not say i make this poem
    and i shared it .
     
    #10 pandahorde, Apr 10, 2007
  11. marlene

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    I've told you three times now not to post other peoples work as your own. Each time you were caught, you gave a different excuse.

    Plagiarism will not be tolerated.

    If you take anything that's written by someone else and try to pass it off as yours, That's plagiarism. Fixing it after you've been caught is NOT what you're supposed to do. You're supposed to post where you found it and then get persmission from the author to use it.

    In this case you didn't do either, and instead gave people the impression you wrote it yourself.

    There is not one indication that the poem was written by someone else.

    Going back and adding the link "I gave you" afterward, doesn't fix the problem, nor does editing your posts to say you were sharing.
     
    #11 marlene, Apr 10, 2007
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