Another planet/ global warming poster

just my poster for school cause of earth day (earth week at my school)

take two on my planet

tell me what you think

 

I think it's neat.
Maybe you should develop the concept of your first poster further.
Manipulating the image so that parts of the southeast coast is under water, adding a tropical storm?
And maybe make the text a little bit lighter? =)

 

i will take the 2nd its really cool
looks like on the discovery channel ..
ohhh.. great theres a green small UFO in 2nd picture.. find it

 

First one you should do something with the text instead of having it so boldly at the top. It looks like it was just pasted on there. Add some style to it and make it flow better with the rest of the image.

other that that it's good!

 

I love both images, but I think you should add some stars to the space in the first one and like Rexx said, you should work more on the font.

 

on picture one, you really need to make the font more flashy :lol:
on picture two, I don't know what to say, that one doesn't really
need much, other than a few more stars... pic 2's my fav.

 

i tried to add as much effect to the text as i could, what could make it flow better?

 

The font and the colour.
Try a thicker font and smothening the lines of it =)

 

one hour later:
im going to make the ice melting when i have more time

 

Nice improvement!
But you might want to change 'Global Warming' a bit, it's really hard to read at the moment.
But that looks much nicer =)

 

i was trying to get it to look as much like smoke as i could, but thats the best i could do.