B&W Peice

Discussion in 'Graphics & Art Showcase' started by Pionex, Jul 27, 2008.

  1. Pionex

    Pionex Level I

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    b/w peice i was working on....

    *edit
    Ewww.. laughs at myself for the horrible peice. * removed
     
  2. ceneret0023

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    I dunno i dont really like it... it's tough to make out what exactly is in the middle and the big black areas just look like too much open space... but hey that's just me :) keep it up though
     
  3. Zer0

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    Yeah, I don't think there are enough values in the picture. Its mostly just dark, with very little contrast. The white spot in the middle is a bit awkward. And its difficult to see the text. But as ceneret said, keep up the work. :)
     
  4. Charlie

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    mostly just dark? yes.

    very little contrast. NO

    Maybe toooo much contrast, it makes the person look like a white blob on the piece. Kinda had to stare at it to tell what it was.. at first I thought it was abstract art. I only got it because i saw the guitar...

    Theres not enough elements in the sig for the use of the negative space on the sides. It just looks empty and plain. Sorry I don't really like it.

    4.5/10
     
  5. Pionex

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    psshh.. more people comment my crap work than my good work... heh...


    thanks garbaged.... im not the best at the B/w
     
  6. Zer0

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    Woops, I guess I phrased that incorrectly. I meant that the contrast isn't consistent throughout the picture. The white blob is very high contrast, whereas everything else if very blurry and the same dark gray.
     
  7. Pionex

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    thanks for the comments piece was removed due to utter ugliness !!!
     
  8. Charlie

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    Why remove it? Should never be ashamed at your work. It kinda serves as a reminder for next time.
     
  9. Pionex

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    No need to hold bad work, I need no reminder.
    however i have learned im not great at every aspect of PS...
    my b/w work still needs Work !!!
     
  10. gawjus1234

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    AAAAHHH! I'VE BEEN RICKROLLED! thanks a lot SirCharles.i should have just listened to your sig.
     
  11. Charlie

    Charlie Level IV

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    Is that really necessary to make a post about that in a totally unrelated thread?
     
  12. gawjus1234

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    sorry this is just the thread where it happened.
     
  13. FastBullet

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    I wanted to join your private party about this Rick Roll.

    Now my question:

    Why would someone listen to this or make people listen to this?[/Spoiler]

    As for the the person who removed it, I want to say that we don't laugh or make fun of anyone here. We just give advices or tips on how or what to correct. We appreciate art or graphic in every way even in abstract (though I doubt I can make something out of some random pixels) .

    Needless to say, you shouldn't have removed the image link because we could have helped you make it better. That's called Progress . <3
     
  14. airisis

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    why did you remove it? please post another