Banner I made for my cafepress

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  1. zer0ordi3yo

    zer0ordi3yo Level IV

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    How does it look? I want as much criticism as possible.
     
  2. woooot

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    Well... i don't really know much about quality. But for me, a 9/10 Kinda annoying for my eyes.
     
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    zer0ordi3yo Level IV

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    What if it was just
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    ^^

    It looks really well made usually when people use animation it looks really rough but this is smooth and pretty... ew
     
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    its blinding :x
    maybe try different colors?
     
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    I like the animated version :) Looks cool.
     
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    it gives me a kinda weird feeling :shock: maybe speed up the time of reappearing on the animated thing? and perhaps change the font? the "L" is a little hard to see... :x
     
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    Wow. The moment I saw this I took in every detail, and I'm stunned by it. You had the color of the text and the suit swap around which in my opinion looks amazing.

    Honestly, I give this a 10/10! You're amazing at Animation dude, keep it up. BTW: What font is that if you don't mind me asking? I need more crazy fonts :).
     
  9. punkeydew

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    first off...

    What is a cafepress

    this will help me rate it :p

    Also.. the black and white is too much in my opinion... They are too even.

    Either make the white dominant and then the black or vise versa?
     
  10. zer0ordi3yo

    zer0ordi3yo Level IV

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    I did not use a font, I never do, I draw all of my own text, and basically anything I make.

    I realize that it's just black and white, but how is sporting more, crazy colors classy? Classy is simple, yet sophisticated, so I like it.

    Cafepress is a site where you can make your own designs and put them onto items in an online store, and you make a pre-determined ammount of money (decided by you, you jack up the price) if the item is sold.


    I jsut don't like the background. I have no idea what to do with it, any ideas?
     
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    punkeydew Level IV

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    I wasn't bashing the black and white. I like black and white too. I was only saying it is too balanced. It would be easier on the eyes if the black and white were not so even. A dominating one would work nicer.

    I would suggest a background that has thicker lines instead of thin ones
     
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    zer0ordi3yo Level IV

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    I don't like the background, either.

    Thicker lines would look...awkward.

    I think I have an idea.
     
  13. pandahorde

    pandahorde Level IV

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    not bad .. 8/10 its cool ..but it makes my eyes dizzy. ..cant also understand the words.. nice using black and white colors.
    nice effect also.
     
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