Yup I my thesis is along the lines of, We have to reduce obesity levels, I just need some help with my three main points.
Completely unrelated, but I love Kanye's album in you av. A point that I've often thought about - Is fast food any better than smoking? Anyways, give what you've got so far on the subject and I'll help put everything together, or at least try. I'll be back in about thirty minutes.
Yeah that album is awesome. I love it too Ok well I've only got a few basic things to work with so far: 1.Obesity causes depression and mental health issues as well. 2. Increases risk of health problem, which we as tax payer have to pay for. 3. The obesity will contineu due to genetics and poor habits if the cycle isn't brocken. Those are my three main points, but I'm not too sure about them.
Concerning your three points, so long as you can develop them well with evidence, you can say them. There's a lot to say about obesity. Like, it encourages a lazy mindset/lifestyle--you can tie that point in with your third point. If you need help with editing, I'm open. GL with the essay!
Thanks for the help, fortunately I was able to finish, it came out pretty good Just hope my teacher ffels the same way
Hmmm.... well, I'm planning on opening a restaurant chain that celebrates not giving a damn about healthy food. Double the grease.... Double the salt.... Double the sugar.... Our best selling items will be placed on - The Fatkins Menu
Yeah if you want any help with editing, just give me a shout. I got a 4 on my AP english exam ( not a 5, but hey; thats darn good anyways)
Congrats on finishing! Your thread now constantly reminds me of the two essays (4k and 2k) that I need to do...yay. ._.