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Discussion in 'Graphics & Art Showcase' started by k1r0, Nov 6, 2007.

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  1. k1r0

    k1r0 Level III

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    Srry for so many threads but if i dident i would be double posting :S

    well here they are

    For my mate

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    And my fav and most recent one

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    could you rate out of 10 with some hints and tips please
     
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    Hybrid Bunny - I think it's a bit plain, though it's not bad. I don't like the strong strokes that you seem to insist on in every signature you make. The background should be more visible in this one too, and those angled lines as pattern... I guess they kinda cut out the effects behind them. Maybe put it on overlay or just reduce opacity. About the render, I guess you should make it blend more with the background too. Try brushing above all that and it will improve.

    Soft Assasian - Well, without counting with the typo of Assassin (if that's what you meant), I think it's surely better than the other above. Those angled lines aren't covering up the background totally and the backgrounds itself seems to be nicely done. Though, you once again didn't blend the render with the whole signature. I don't know if this was done on purpose, but imo, I guess that if you manage to blend the render with the signature and make them feel one, it'll give a better impression. The font is ok, though you typo'ed again Dream and I'm not attracted by the glow too.

    Keep it up though, u're getting better =)
     
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    Urg damn typo's im not a strong speller lmao, have to go edit those, thanks for pointing thaT out and the detailed comment will help in future
     
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    ROFL @ assasian typo.... they are alrite... like goncalo said u should make things blend in more... but still i cant make these so ur better than me.... good work... keep practising :)
     
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    You can edit your posts. And add [updated] to your existing thread title.
    Now you know.
     
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