Just a nova

So what do you think of it ?

 

It lacks defintion... Its just colours smudged to me...

 

i think the background should be black.. it gonna look great.

 

I think that you should use photoshop for stuff like that (and everything else xD).
But yea, a lil' more definition and a background color other than white would make it look better ^^

 

Owww...let me re-make it



Some alternatives :





Btw i am too lazy to add a background

 

The first one's cool ^^
The other ones look live you've made them in a hurry, sorry if I'm wrong

 

oohhh.. yeah that was im talking about cool blending great!

 

no offence, but you cant really tell what it is, you need to add some more stuff to it and as someone said before give it more definition

 

yup you are right

and i will make others later

 

what is it? Looks like a blur

 

you could try to add a nebula around the explosion, since that's what a real nova would be like

 

I really love the first one in your second group but as everyone else has said. add, add, add. These can only get better now

 

Yea, the only one I think is any good is the first one from the second post.

6:10

 

My last try

 

I think it looks cool. But then as I am utterly useless and am unable to do any graphics (probably would help if I bought a graphics programme), my opinion might not count.

Think it's pretty nifty though. 8)

 

Very good, You improve fast

See you later