It's a good fic, the idea is original (at least, I think so) A little constructive critism if I may? I think the word leaves is over used, a small point but very noticable when reading. Also in my opinion the part's are too short. There is alot of description which is good, however there is no dialogue, granted Domonic has nobody to talk too but dialogue would help understand what Domonic is thinking and feeling. Overall, it's good, continue with it