New model piece

It's a mess.... I don't like it. Your views?

 

its ... ummmmm... interesting. why dont you explain it to us in case someone might not possibly know what its supposed to be. lol

 

It's a front for a modeling group I'm involved in. There are two female models in the background

 

oohhh. does it have to be so gloomy. i think you should make it brighter and happier.

 

That's not what modeling is about lol we don't want to be all happy and PINK.

 

i didnt say pink i meant so it doesnt look like the lady is in an abandoned shop in the ghetto of new york.

 

But that is what we want, Im actually glad you said that b/c she is in an abandoned shop lol and the other is in a ghetto subway. Our sponsors want us to be slummed, sloppy, and different. We will not conform

 

ok. if you want it to seem creepy then good job. also, the one on the left looks a little possesed

 

You have to be a model to understand, we have standards... If you watch a fashion show you would understand, modeling now a day isn't about shinny and pretty. It's changed for a large part.

 

I'd say try and make the models stand out a bit more.

 

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I like the feel of everything but I definitally think the models should be clearer

 

your right, i dont know anything about models, so i cant really give a good critique on your graphic. i am sorry if i was a little mean before.

 

While you don't have to be pink and happy, I do think the models should be showcased clearer and better. No matter how modeling has changed, I'd wager that it still depends on looking at the models and whatever they're modeling, but you cover them up a lot in that.

It can be glooming without affecting the visibility of the models, in my opinion.

 

Nah it's ok

 

No matter how you want to look, the models still need to stand out. They're in the background, the FelixTV thing is what's drawing the attention.

 

The left half looks fine

But on the right you seem to have brushed out the face of the girl.

 

Thats me

 

Yeah but you're not what the pictures supposed to be focused on. Take a step down, blend the FelixTV thing in more, and focus the picture on the models.