New Piece: Enlightenment EDIT: Now Finished!!!!

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  1. Charlie

    Charlie Level IV

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    WIP = Work in Progress

    Well I've finally found time to start something for once.. and after much frustration, I've managed to put something together but it's not done yet... I'm going to add more but I need some advice and critique on what I should edit or add/remove.

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    I put my name over the image because it's not finished yet and I don't want any stealing =]



    EDIT:
    It's done!

    http://sir-charles.deviantart.com/art/E ... t-99325087 clicky pl0x

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  2. xProphet

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    Re: New Piece! Kinda... Not really. It's more of a WIP...

    mmh...good atmosphere...Excellent contrast...The bg is fantastic :)
    But the font :/............ :(
    You should remove
    we see too much and ruin a lot. :D

    Compliments: Vote [8.5/11]
     
  3. Charlie

    Charlie Level IV

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    Re: New Piece! Kinda... Not really. It's more of a WIP...

    well It's going to be removed.. once I finish it.. it's not done yet.
     
  4. Phee

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    Re: New Piece! Kinda... Not really. It's more of a WIP...

    extend the lightness a little bit so there's more movement in the photo. I'm assuming your focal point is the bright white spot, and your eye travels down diagonally to the bottom right? The chunk of black is too thick and doesn't flow.

    But amazing details and everything. Fantastic. =)
     
  5. Charlie

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    Re: New Piece! Kinda... Not really. It's more of a WIP...

    Bottom left... yeah Ima add something down thur...
     
  6. Phee

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    Re: New Piece! Kinda... Not really. It's more of a WIP...

    pfft, left, right, what's the difference?

    you're really good with the whole space graphics aren't you. :)
     
  7. FastBullet

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    Re: New Piece! Kinda... Not really. It's more of a WIP...

    What do you mean it's more of a WIP? IT's already finished man.

    10/10 !!! :yup:


    It's looks way cooler this way and adding something else in it would only ruin it :arf:
     
  8. Charlie

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    Re: New Piece! Kinda... Not really. It's more of a WIP...

    Well most of its finished.. I just added some extra tweeks and details.. I pretty much finished it now..

    and Phee... there is a big difference in left and right ;) Especially when you begin to drive.

    I'll post an update when I finish it... I just gotta think of a title.

    EDIT: Done! Look at first post I posted the finished product.
     
  9. Heya_old

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    Re: New Piece! Kinda... Not really. It's more of a WIP...


    wow, just wow, lol. Thats really good. The first one was 7/10, but the final product is a 10/10 for sure :D really nice work :)
     
  10. Charlie

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    Thanks ^_^
     
  11. DeNo

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    this is amazing!
    I've always dreamed of so effortlessly crafting masterpieces like this.
    but i have the patience nor the skill for drawing things on a computer :(
    i once drew a tree. it turned out looking like a chiken..
    So i all i can do is, props my friend.
     
  12. Charlie

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    Lol if you practice more then you'll get better.
     
  13. Rach

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    Wow. I just wanted to say .. this is really good.
     
  14. annoymus

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    wow , great work

    do u mind if i use it as a wallpaper? :D
     
  15. Charlie

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    go ahead.
     
  16. ceneret0023

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    i've always wanted to try stuff like this but i never know where to start xD, lol but this is amazing... i love the colors you used :) they match perfectly and it's not too bright that it hurts my eyes to look at yet not too dark that i can't see a thing... also for the greenish yellow cloud astroid belt looking things did you have those as a stock photo or did you make them yourself? cuz i love this piece and if i have to rate it i give it a
    10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 :lol:
     
  17. Charlie

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    Heh, I rendered the clouds myself... lol Filter>Render>Clouds lul
     
  18. ceneret0023

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    lol oh that's simple lol
     
  19. Charlie

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    yup, it helps just to play around with photoshop
     
  20. dee123123

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    Looks apocalyptic...nice!