NEW SIGNATURE! First one in a long time.

Eh...It seems kinda crowded and it's hard to focus on the focal point.
What do you guys think?

EDITED:

This is what I got after listening to everyones advice/criticism:

 

um, i cant really tell what it is? oh well, its still a good job

 

its pretty cool.
its the guy from crysis, right?
that might not be the correct game but hes from some game with system requirements beyond my pc.

 

I think it's Crysis...
lol.
I just found it on planet render and it was awesome so I thought wth!

SHOOT!! I just noticed this is in the wrong section
Very sorry mods!
This should go in the Showcase :arf:

 

Good Work!
Color: 7/10
Effects: 8.5/10

 

I think whatever that is in the focus is too light in shading. try and darken it and this sig is a winner.

 

Effects : 9/10
Colours : 10/10
Design : 10/10
Problems : 1/10

So it's a winner!

 

Thanks everyone
I'll look into what you guys said.

Oh & thanks whoever moved the thread. (Phee?)

 

Your edited one is a lot better than the first one...in the original one there's not much contrast between the bg and the actual guy thing.

9/10 (Edited one)

 

Very nice. There definitely improvement in the second one. But I think you should add a bit more contrast and color to it.

 

Thanks for the input Pando and Cackle.
I'll get started on adding more contrast in a little bit. I really want this signature to be perfect.

 

very nice! crysis is an awesome game too!

 

It's purdyful ^^ Try and make me one xP It's in the graphics request thread, if I use it you win 50k if I use somebody else's you get +rep anyway =D

 

I already made you one XD
Plus, IDK how it would look this way with the images you want me to use.
Sorry D:

 

Oops xD I mixed up usernames all I remembered was it was short and began with C xP

 

Heh. That's alright

If I could make you one like this, I would. I just don't know how to use the kind of stock you want me to and all the C4Ds and stuff. Confusing, kinda.