Some feedback, please?

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  1. Phee

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    I was thinking of making an icon to use for NF, and started messing around in PSP. I don't like it too much, it didn't turn out the way I had imagined. I might just scrap it altogether. The more I look at it, the less I like it.

    Suggestions? Improvements? New ideas? Much appreciated.

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    the black outline is too sharp in comparison to the inside image, maybe blur that layer?
     
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    I quite like the outline, but the image inside looks too blurred, or that could just be me?!
     
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    did you use paint.net to make this
     
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    She said PSP, I believe that stands for Paint Shop Pro?
     
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    not bad
     
  7. junkant

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    I like the colors.
    Can you make the item not be in the "pop box thingy".
    Keep the green background, the colors complement each other.
    Try putting it in a box like this [ ], black outlines like that and the image might balance itself with those black lines on the item.
    I hope I was helpful and understand of what I was saying.
     
  8. Phee

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    Thanks VERY much for all your help:)

    The original image had lines too thin for my liking, so I traced over them manually with I think it was a 3px brush. That's why it seems blurry- I blurred over my traced lines, to make them less choppy, but the not the inside. I think the original skeem potion itself had a bit of blur on the inside, and I probably added a bit too much to that. And yes, I did use PSP, or Paint Shop Pro (9).

    The outline is a little rough, but that's because it's on a transparent background. The inside edge, as you can see, is much smoother. I'll try and mess around some more, fix it up a bit now.
     
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    I like it. But I too think it is just a rad too blurry :D

    It is a very nice icon though
     
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    If you retrace it do it at a high zoom and it won't come out so choppy and then you won't have to blur it.
     
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    I did retrace it at a high zoom. Human error is the reason it comes out choppy.
     
  12. Virre

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    Either get a bigger picture (the bottle or whatever it is) or make that one smaller because with the blurry-ness I can't really see what the picture is supposed to be (I'm guessing some kind of glass bottle with copper 'earrings'?).

    Practice makes perfect =)
     
  13. planetpluto

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    Also you're probably using a mouse and then can be a pain to draw with.
     
  14. Phee

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    Nah, a tablet, though it's a bit messed up.

    It's a Skeem Potion.
     
  15. planetpluto

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    Makes sense given your name.

    I'm actually looking to buy a tablet, would you recommend any as particularly good (and cheap)?
     
  16. Phee

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    Medion tablets are great and pretty cheap too. I got a new one off Ebay for about 85 bucks, I think. It was 9x12! :D They're great, but the only reason they're not more popular is because the tablets aren't sold in the US, only Europe.

    Ebay is your best bet to getting your hands on one- otherwise, you're pretty much stuck with Wacom. They're great, but SO expensive! A 9 by 12 is over 300 bucks, last time I checked. The price might have gone down, I got my tablet about a year or two ago.
     
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