Someone Want To make me a small Poem? +Rep!

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  1. X Joe Kickass X

    X Joe Kickass X Level IV

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    Yeah, it has to be couplets (where the endings of line 1 and 2 ryhym and 3 and 4 etc.) It has to have the rythmn of any nursery ryhme. It must be on one topic. And must have 4 sets of couplets. (8 lines)
     
  2. looneytoon

    looneytoon Level III

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    I'll give a crack at it since no one else has...

    Did it to the "This Old Man, He Played One..." nursery rhyme

    This Red Porshe, it Drove Fast,
    Right Into A Pole It Crashed,
    With a boom, bam, bom it ran into the pole,
    This Red Porshe couldnt drive no mo,
    This Red Porshe, it was clean,
    Had spinning rims with a nice bright sheen,
    Nice white leather with tinted black windows too,
    This Red Porshe was way too cool.

    Man... hope this is what you wanted.. just incase it wasnt here is another one,

    Mr Billy Joe, Joe, Joe,
    Always Smoked Dro, Dro, Dro,
    Paid 5 Bucks, Bucks, Bucks,
    And Sold His Chucks, Chucks, Chucks,
    For a Dime Bag of Weed, Weed, Weed,
    But his bagw as full of seeds, seeds, seeds,
    So he grew his own, own, own,
    And 10 plants were grown, grown, grown.

    If you got a teacher like mine you can use that 2nd one
     
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    X Joe Kickass X Level IV

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    Thanks, and that second one... uh... yeah
     
  4. osok69

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    lol i like that second one it made me laugh plus rep for my laugh of the day!
     
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    pandahorde Level IV

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    And what else do I fear? Let me begin again.



    by:panda_Horde
     
  6. baldudexx

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    That one is better than the others, lol.
    Nice poetry. ;)

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