C&C: latest sig

Discussion in 'Graphics & Art Showcase' started by CoS, Aug 14, 2009.

  1. CoS

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    Hi constructive criticism only please :arf:
     

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  2. SoC

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  3. Billy

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    i thought you said you were making a sig for billeh :(

    too blurry, get a nice crispy high res pic and put some cool effects on it. but thats just my opinion, some peopel like blurry i guess
     
  4. Fexxel

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    Constructive critism:
    -It's a bit.. blurry?
    -It's a bit dark...
    -The text color doesn't really stand out...
    -You could always try a different aproach and make it round or something. Play with the border a bit?
     
  5. ceneret0023

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    as everybody has said before it is a bit blurry but i must say if you take the color overlay or whatever you did on top of everything off then it won't be blurry anymore, but of course that would cause it to be a bit bland and i honestly can't think of anything to do with a car i don't like working with em at all... i can say though that the motion blur on the car doesn't flow with your c4d render in the background and that makes the entire thing look awkward.
     
  6. Fexxel

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    Honestly, it seems a bit plain. You should go back to things without cars in the signatures as (one of) the main picture. (Like your current signature is very good, and you seem more talented at that type of graphics than automobiles)
     
  7. piggybepink

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    Since everyone already commented on the blurriness...

    You need to change the font and its color. The blue doesn't really match, and the style is familiar/overused. Waaait, going through fonts right now--you could try AylaCSscript and make the text bigger.

    As for the placement, what if you put it in the upper left hand corner, so it won't be on top of the car and somehow make it look as if the care was in front of the car in depth.

    I don't know if I make sense. xD Basically, just change the style and color of the text. :p

    I like what you've done with the image. :yup: