ohhh. It would prolly pop out if the forum background was black. someone above has a good idea. I didnt notice some of it was pixelie. Lol.
- There's no real flow in this, needs more depth, add a light source, it'll enhance it's depth. The render looks blurry next to the black lines, sharpen it to make it stand out as the focal and the text is a bit bold or maybe it's too big. A black border may help it look more complete. - It looks incomplete. xD The background is very bland, too much empty space it needs more to it, the light source looks odd as it is coming from two different places so I think it would look better if the bottom gun wasn't shown and the rays were replaced with c4ds to give a better effect and more flow. The colors don't go together well.
If you are gonna cut it in half like that, you should at least let the rays go off the black and through the entire sig. Or somehow make those 2 separate components. Also, no need for your name signature? And pixels are bad for you
Ah good point about the rays going off the black. That never crossed my mind. EDIT: New sig I fail at text so lets not talk about that EDIT AGAIN: Made another one I think I made this one way too small