What's your opinion on my siggy?

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  1. oxlilshorti

    oxlilshorti Level I

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    So I made this siggy and avatar by myself using adobe CS2 what are your thoughts?
     
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    Quite nice but the render should be the focal of this signature, so maybe position it in the middle? It also needs to be blended in. The text also needs a bit of work.
     
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    Perddy :)
    Alot better then i could do, i tried but failed miserably lol
    *pokes my siggy* Piggy made mine.
    If its your first its pretty good XD
     
  4. Rena

    Rena Level III

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    I'm not a design expert, but yeah, the text seems to be less prominent than it should be, and right now it looks like the light is the focal area of the image (unless you intended it to be that way!). Perhaps you can centralise the text, or modify the blending so that it stands out more (e.g. stroke? lol.)
     
  5. oxlilshorti

    oxlilshorti Level I

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    well the light isn't ment to be my main focal point the render is but I just feel its a good effect with the camera glare I added on the light... and I do need to fix that text any ideas?
     
  6. piggybepink

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    A border would look nice. And Scorpio's right on the dot, saying that your render should be more integrated into the picture.

    As for the background, a lot of stuff seems to be happening. Remember, simplicity is always nice. Also, maybe you should consider changing the font style of "She Chose Him". Making it more block-y.

    Otherwise, though, nice job. :yup:
     
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    oxlilshorti Level I

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    thanks Pi! ok now what kind of render are you talking about? like should I have not gone with Master Cheif? maybe I should have chosen Cortana!
     
  8. gregoden52

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    Looks good to me...Better than I ever can do.
     
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    piggybepink Level II

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    It's not a matter of your choice but your execution. What I meant was you should try making Master Chief look more apart of your sig, e.g. using the blending change application in PS.
     
  10. oxlilshorti

    oxlilshorti Level I

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    Ahhh I see what you mean... ok sounds good will do